英语复习资料：作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理。 考研英语待批改作文： 5-7分
第三篇 Dear shop assistant，
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the time you have taken to help me to look for my last wallet. If it had not been for your assistance in putting an inform and searching carefully every comers of the shop， I fear that I would have been lost several hundred yuan。
Every one agrees that it was you who were enthusiastic and friendly ,such as helping the elder customers to carry goods to their cars and the caser to find their lost things. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear shop assistant，
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the time you have taken to help me to look for my last（拼写错误，lost） wallet. If it had not been for your assistance in putting an inform and searching carefully every comers (拼写错误 corner)of the shop， I fear that I would have been lost (have been lost 是迷路的意思，丢钱是have been losing )several hundred(加s) yuan。
Every one agrees that it was you who were (形容某人的品质时，用一般现在时，改为are)enthusiastic and friendly ,such as helping the elder customers to carry goods to their cars and the caser(拼写错误) to find their lost things. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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同学你好，英语中的句号是.建议你写完作文后再仔细的检查一遍，这样可以避免很多不必要的小错误，例如单词拼写。另外，注意lose这个词的多重意思。
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