考研英语小作文批改：邀请信5-7分例文1

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英语复习资料：作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理。
考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
    第一篇
    Dear Kate,
    There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.
    Campus English Corner
    October 22, 2012

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
　　Dear Kate,
    There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.
    （加Sincerely yours，） Campus English Corner
    October 22, 2012（删除）
    5分
    同学你好，考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右，你的作文虽然没有大问题，但是包含的内容太少，句型变换等也太少了。另外，要注意书信的格式。