考研英语小作文批改：感谢信0-4分例文5

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    第五篇
    Dear teacher，
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing, I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.
    Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty.It seems that you don't feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming  考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear teacher，
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it hadnot been for your assistance in the respect of English writing(in 后面应该加动名词，此外，respect 是尊敬的意思，用词不当), I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.(这句话是虚拟语气，意思是如果不是你的帮助，我恐怕将会…)
    Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty（it was…who…是个强调句，这句话的意思是每个人都说是你…例如帮助我）It seems that you don't feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
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    同学你好，英语的句号是.你的英语基础比较薄弱，建议你多看看英语范文，背一些模版。