考研英语小作文批改：感谢信5-7分例文5

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考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
　　第五篇
    Dear Ms. Wang,
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
    Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Ms. Wang,
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness(改为kind) help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed(改为missing) the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
    Every one agrees that it was you who are(改为were) my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    6分
    同学你好，写作文时要再认真一点，写完后再检查一遍，有些小错就可以及时改正，另外，建议你去看一下虚拟语气的句型。时态要保持一致。