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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing to express my heartfelt apoloy. I am refering to the unfortunate accident yesterday, when I broke down your CD.
     To solve this problem, I hope you could give me particular information as regards name, singer and publisher of that CD. I know it is your favorite CD which sent by your grandemother. I could not give an exactly same, but I would try my best to finda new ont to you. Please tell me your most accessible address so that I can deliver it to you as soon as possible.
     Once again, I sincerely apologize for my careless mistake, as well as for any inconvenience thus caused to you.
    Yours sincerely,
    LiMing
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to express my heartfelt apoloy（拼写错误）. I am refering（拼写错误） to the unfortunate accident yesterday, when I broke down your CD. To solve this problem, I hope you could give me particular information as regards name, singer and publisher of that CD. I know it is your favorite CD which sent by your grandemother（拼写错误）. I could not give an exactly same（加one）, but I would try my best to finda new ont（one） to you. Please tell me your most accessible address so that I can deliver it to you as soon as possible. Once again, I sincerely apologize for my careless mistake, as well as for any inconvenience thus caused to you.Yours sincerely,LiMing点评：7分写的还不错，注意拼写错误，同时注意控制字数。