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Dear Bob,
     I miss you so much.You can't image how excitedI were when I heard you would come backnext friday .Howere, I'am writing this letter to apologise for thatI couldn't get to the airport on time .
    Your plane will arrive at 11 o'clock ,yet,my English text is during 9 to 11.And it will take me 15 minutes togo to the airport .So,you would better have acup of coffe at theairport lounge .I will get there as soon as possible .
     Please allow me to say sorry again .I sincerely hope you can understand my situation .
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I miss you so much. You can't image how excitedI were（应该用was） when I heard you would come backnext friday（Friday）. Howere（拼写错误）, I'am（I’m） writing this letter to apologise for thatI couldn't get to the airport on time.Your plane will arrive at 11 o'clock ,yet, my English text is during 9 to 11.And it will take me 15 minutes togo to the airport .So, you would better have acup of coffe（拼写错误） at theairport lounge .I will get there as soon as possible . Please allow me to say sorry again .I sincerely hope you can understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7-8分写的蛮不错的，要注意单词的拼写和细节。