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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:18 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Bob,
    I’m writing this letter to apologize for keeping you wait yesterday. I hope you can give me a chance to explain the situation of what happened to me.
    We should have met yesterday afternoon. However, my sister got a high fever unexpectedly. And there was no one except me to send her to the hospital. In the hasty, I forgot the appointment and didn’t tell you in time.
    Can you forgive me and we make another time to meet? Please give me your appropriate time and accept my sincere apology. I look forward to hearing from you.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter to apologize for keeping you wait yesterday. I hope you can give me a chance to explain the situation of what happened to me.We should have met yesterday afternoon. However, my sister got a high fever unexpectedly. And there was no one except me to send her to the hospital. In the hasty, I forgot the appointment and didn’t tell you in time.Can you forgive me and we make another time to meet? Please give me your appropriate time and accept my sincere apology. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming(落款位于右下角)点评:9分写的很好。争取拿满分。
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