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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you for I will not be able to go to Xian as planned next Tuesday for the reason that I have to take the final exam. Therefore ,I’ll arrive at Xian on next Sunday .I know how much preparation you have made for my visit to Xian ,and you even have made a reservation fo me in the hotel around your campus. I’m afraid that you may have to cancel the booking or put off the reservation for four days.Please allow me say sorry again for this change. And looking forward to meet you next Sunday.Yours,Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you for I will not be able to go to Xian as planned next Tuesday for the reason that I have to take the final exam. Therefore ,I’ll arrive at Xian on next Sunday .I know how much preparation you have made for my visit to Xian , and you even have made a reservation fo（for）me in the hotel around your campus. I’m afraid that you may have to cancel the booking or put off the reservation for four days.Please allow me say sorry again for this change. And looking forward to meet you（加介词on） next Sunday.Yours,Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错的，错误也比较少。稍微控制下字数 |
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发表于 2017-8-6 14:09:13