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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to apologize for my carelessness.I forgot to return the book I borrowed from you.
     I found the book when I got home.I am sorry that you can not read it at present.How about I post it to you?If I do so,I am afraid that you have to wait for it at least three days.If you need it currently,you can buy another one and I will pay for it.You can call me when you have other solution.
     Please accept my sincere sorry for it.
    Yours truly,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize for my carelessness. I forgot to return the book I borrowed from you. I found the book when I got home. I am sorry that you can not read it at present. How about I post it to you? If I do so, I am afraid that you have to wait for it at least three days. If you need it currently, you can buy another one and I will pay for it. You can call me when you have other solution. Please accept my sincere sorry for it.Yours truly,Li Ming点评：8-9分写的很好。结尾可以再充实一点。例如：Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapologyforanyinconveniencesIhavecaused.Thankyoufor
yourunderstandingandpleasesendmeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.