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Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you for I could not return the books in time which I borrowed from you last week,I am so sorry that you can not use it at present.
     Last week I borrowed your books andpromise you give it back today.But I have to be a business trip since yesterday.Ifyou don't need the books at once,you can wait me come back and return it.But if you need the books at present,I will call my roommatereturn it to you.
     I am sorry to have put you to so much trouble.I hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Looking forward to your reply.
     Your sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you for I could not return the books in time which I borrowed from you last week, I am so sorry that you can not use it at present. Last week I borrowed your books andpromise you （加不定式to）give it back today. But I have to be（这里不能用be，要么改成do，要么在do后面加on） a business trip since yesterday. Ifyou don't need the books at once, you can wait me （加不定式to）come back and（加不定式to） return it. But if you need the books at present, I will call my roommate（加不定式to）return it to you. I am sorry to have put you to so much trouble. I hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Looking forward to your reply. Your（Yours） sincerely, Li Ming点评：6分字数超的比较多注意控制字数。注意动词的使用。