考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(337)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob,
    I have arrived in China safely.I'm writing to apologize to you for one thing wich made me embarrassed.When I unclosed my luggage,i found your favorate CD "21 GUNS" was in it,it must be that I had forgot to return it to you in hurry.
    I plan to solve this problem with all my efforts. I intend to return this CD to you by DHL,please give your new address and post code.If you are not anxious about it,I would bring it back when I finished vacation and got your flat.Please E-MAIL me which way you prefer to .
    Once again I would sincerely express my apology to you for any inconvenience I ever made.Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.     Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
    I have arrived in China safely. I'm writing to apologize to you for one thing wich（which） made me embarrassed. When I unclosed my luggage, i（大写） found your favorate（拼写错误） CD "21 GUNS"（英语中书名等不用书名号或分号） was in it,（缺少连词） it must be that I had forgot to return it to you in hurry.
    I plan to solve this problem with all my efforts. I intend to return this CD to you by DHL, please give（加me） your new address and post code. If you are not anxious about it, I would bring it back when I finished vacation and got your flat. Please E-MAIL me which way you prefer to .
    Once again I would sincerely express my apology to you for any inconvenience I ever made. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
点评：6分超出字数比较多，要注意控制字数。