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经典句式
I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your kind assistance as always.
I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning…
In the first place…
I would also recommend…
Last but not least…
I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.
范文
Dear Professor Byron,
Last week you asked students to write and give you feedback on your lectures. Therefore, I have outlined my thoughts below.
In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues with the use of simple drawings. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you could provide us with more handouts, as I often don’t have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to see more discussion work, as I find this method the most suitable way to clarify and deepen my understanding of the subject content.
I’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in your students and look forward to your next lecture.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming | 
发表于 2017-3-14 21:58:30