2014考研英语一小作文范文及点评（沪江网校版）

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Honorable president,
        I’m writing this letter to express my views concerning about how to improve the health status among our university students. My suggestions are as follows.
        Firstly, we should pay more attention to the physical conditions of the undergraduates rather than their academic performances. Secondly, adequate PE lessons should be guaranteed in their course systems. Finally, we hope that our university should regularly organize various extracurricular activities. Through the implementation of the above methods, I am convinced that the health conditions of our college students could be enhanced considerably.
        I am looking forward to your reply and I will appreciate your consideration for my proposals.
        Yours sincerely,
        Xxx  
        点评：本篇考研英语一的小作文是考研常见的建议信，题材涉及大学校园生活，考生应该比较熟悉，难度不大。需要注意的是小作文重在语句的精炼，在信中要清晰明了地表达观点、列明论点。考生在书写时，应当首先表明写此信件的目的；然后具体阐述几个方面，并可借用firstly, secondly, finally等标示词有条理地阐明自己的建议；最后写希望收信人给予回复或采纳，并表示感谢。