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47 Writing
suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. write your classmates an email to
1) inform them about the details and
2)encourage them to participate in
100 words use LiMing.
Don't write your address.
应试步骤一：审题
1.体裁：信
2.内容：求助“in need of help”
3.收信人：classmates
4.落款：Li Ming
5.相关隐藏要点分析
（1）人物关系：同学们，注意对象是复数，且熟悉，所以不需自我介绍过多。但是为什么Li Ming 写信，因为Li Ming 负责“in charge of”或者“take charge”。
（2）相关细节：“your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help”
A.义卖啥时候办，在哪里办？地点+时间
B.义卖需要“item”，可以是衣服（clothes），可以是玩具（），也可以是书籍
C.捐以上的东西就是帮助，大纲词汇捐献“donate”，不会写就写give your belongings to
D.在什么时间捐给谁？“class”只能捐给班长“monitor”。
应对步骤二：回忆授课内容：
1.通用内容：
（1）人称：Dear Classmates
（2）自我介绍：I am……who
（3）感谢：
A. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.
B. Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.
C. Thank you for your time and consideration.
（4）回信：
A.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
B. Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated.
（5）落款：your sincerely，Li Ming
2. 特定内容：
（1）写作目的：The purpose of the letter that I am writing is to ask you for some help.
（2）求助结尾：同普通感谢.
应试步骤三：书写(126)
Dear Classmates
I am Li Ming who is one of your classmates ，and I am in charge of the charity sale for kids which is held by our class.
The purpose of the letter that I am writing is to invite you to ask you for some help.The charity sale will be held in the theater of our college on April 1, 2013. the occasion needs the items to sale.If you want to donate your book, toy or something else,you can take the things to our monitor Zhang Hua before this Sunday.Please participate in us.We would be honored to have you there with us.
I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming |
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发表于 2016-8-15 21:41:31