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考研英语小作文邀请信(8-10分)范文赏析一

  8-10分
  第一篇
  Dear Dr.Wang,
  There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
  The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
  I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
  Yours sincerely,
  Li Ming
  考研英语作文批改点评如下:
  Dear Dr.Wang,
  There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
  The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
  I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
  Yours sincerely,
  Li Ming
  9分
  同学你好,作文写的很好 ,没有语法错误,但是内容要是再丰富一些会更好。
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