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2009年考研英语真题大作文模板:网络利弊

近年来英语作文评分标准越来越“去模板化”,所谓模板则是指一些常见的句型罗列。但是,作文真的就不需要模板了吗?当然不是,你所需做的是,参考优秀模板,结合自己平日总结的单词词汇,整理出属于你自己的模板。下面以一位英语大神的作文为例。
    当时整理的英语作文(水平肯定不是非常高,但希望对大家有所帮助。文中可能会有一些小错误,大家看的时候多留心。还是建议大家自己整理,我当时整理的这些仅供参考):
    2009年考研英语真题大作文模板:网络利弊
    As is shown in the picture above, innumerable people are sitting in their
isolated rooms, surfing on the Internet. It seems that the Internet has
connected people together, because they can chat with other people all over the
world, but upon closer observation, we can learn from the picture that people
have been separated from each other effectively, because the walls between them
restrict them to their own world.
    The connotation of the picture is to remind us that while the Internet has
brought a great deal of convenience and proficiency to us, it also acts as a
barrier, prohibiting the face-to-face communication. Undoubtedly, the Internet
has its minus and pluses, and it’s necessary to analyze its influences on our
life. On the one hand, the modern technology represented by the internet does
have its advantages, such as online shopping, online chatting, and online news,
all of which enable us to obtain what we want without travelling thousands of
miles, and shorten the distance between people. On the other hand, the dramatic
technological changes that have provided us with more communication
opportunities have also increased the risk that we will be more alienated from
our relatives and friends. The people in the picture may feel lonely after a
long time of Internet life.
    From the analysis above, we can come to the conclusion that we should treat
the Internet with a reasonable attitude and use it in a proper way. While we
enjoy the benefits provided by the Internet, we should not forget that the
virtual net world cannot be a substitute for the real world. And we should
cherish the intimacy of the face-to-face communication. Only in this way can we
have a wholesome life.
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