考研英语小作文批改：道歉信0-4分例文1
英语复习资料：作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理。考研英语待批改作文：
0-4分
第一篇
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of China's industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that I have been invested to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold by the world economic organization as academic critics during October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of China's industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that｛I have been invested（用词不当）to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold（改为held） by the world economic organization as academic critics｝ during（改为from） October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4分
同学你好，表达能力需要提高，这篇作文中有词汇使用以及语法结构的错误，导致我不能理解你要表达的意思。建议你多背一些满分作文，积累一些好的句型、词组。
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