考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(538)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, two tourists throw rubbish to the river while sightseeing on a small boat and there are all kinds of rubbish on the surface of the river such as plastics, fish skeletons, lunch box and so on. The drawing does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.
The implied meaning of the drawing should be taken into account seriously. More and more people would like to travel around, however, few of them realize that we should protect the environment, which may lead to pollution of the environment and destruction of the ecological balance. The current social phenomenon should arouse the great concern of our whole society.
In my view, protection of the environment is significant to the earth, and pollution of the environment does harm to our human beings. In order to eliminate the current uncivilized phenomena revealed in the drawing, relevant laws and regulations must be established to wipe out the behavior of littering garbage everywhere. Only in this way can we protect the environment and maintaining the balance of eco-system.
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
As is vividly betrayed（这个词是背叛、出卖的意思） in the drawing above, two tourists throw rubbish to the river while sightseeing on a small boat and there are all kinds of rubbish on the surface of the river such as plastics, fish skeletons, lunch box and so on. The drawing does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.The implied meaning of the drawing should be taken into account seriously. More and more people would like to travel around, however, few of them（这样的话太绝对了，可以用not every of us） realize that we should protect the environment, which may lead to pollution of the environment and destruction of the ecological balance. The current social phenomenon should arouse the great concern of our whole society. In my view, protection of the environment is significant to the earth, and pollution of the environment does harm to our human beings. In order to eliminate the current uncivilized phenomena revealed in the drawing, relevant laws and regulations must be established to wipe out the behavior of littering garbage everywhere. Only in this way can we protect the environment and maintaining the balance of eco-system.点评：6分后半部分写跑题了，这篇作文是旅游与环境保护的话题。
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