考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(501)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
This metaphorical and impressive portrayal does reveal a not uncommon phenomenon of how the beauty of nature is being spoiled by visitors.Traveling on a small boat in a lake, two tourists are discarding their picnicing leftovers causally into the lake,lefting behind a trail of rubbish like plastic containers,fish-bones,banana skin,watermelon rind,bottles,tins,food wrappings and so on.
The purpose of the cartoonist is to remind us of the significance of paying due attention to the devastating effects exerted on the environment by flooded vistors traveling many of the senic spots in our country.To begin with,the owner of senic spots all over the country,in favor of earning money instead of passing down the beauty of nature,have been spoiling the natural environment by creating and building useless constructions,and welcoming God-knows-how-many travelers every year.In addition,the tourists,laboring under the belief that they have paid for leisure,seem to ignore the responsibility of cherishing the natural beauty.
On the basis of analysis above,it is imperative for us to take environmental protection into consideration.All is needed for the triumph of the perishing of the beauty of nature is that good people do nothing.As a concequence of leaving the nature as it is,confining the visitors in quantity,enhancing the awareness of people on environmental protection,unwavering government support,the future of the senic spots looks brighter and more secure than ever before.
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
【This matephorical（拼写错误）and impressive portrayal does reveal a not uncommon phenomenon of how the beauty of nature is being spoiled by vistors（拼写错误）.】（这句话放在第二句更合适） Traveling on a small boat in a lake, two tourists are discarding their picnicing（拼写错误）leftovers causally into the lake, 【lefting（拼写错误）behind a trail of rubbish like plastic containers, fish-bones, banana skin, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings and so on.】（湖里的垃圾不都是他们留下的）The purpose of the cartoonist is to remind us of the significance of paying due attention to the devastating effects exerted on the environment by flooded vistors （拼写错误）traveling many of the senic（拼写错误） spots in our country. To begin with, the owner of senic（拼写错误） spots all over the country, in favor of earning money instead of passing down the beauty of nature, have been spoiling the natural environment by creating and building useless constructions, and welcoming God-knows-how-many travelers every year. In addition, the tourists, laboring under the belief that they have paid for leisure, seem to ignore the responsibility of cherishing the natural beauty.On the basis of analysis above, it is imperative for us to take environmental protection into consideration. Allisneeded for the triumph of the perishing of the beauty of natureis（这里有两个is做谓语）that good people do nothing（这句话的背景是：恶行之所以得逞，就是因为好人无所作为。所以感觉用在这里不太合适。或者说是我的理解还不全面，此词组还有别的解释）. 【As a concequence of leaving the nature as it is, confining the vistors（拼写错误） in quantity, enhancing the awareness of people on environmental protection, unwavering government support, the future of the senic（拼写错误）spots looks brighter and more secure than ever before.】（这句话句子结构不正确，红色字体部分作主语，后面没有与之配合的谓语）点评：11分字数有点多，要组织好语言，简化表达。同时内容上做适当的调整。
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