考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(481)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writting to make an apology to you for I cannot attend to your birthday party this firday evening.During to my grandfather in hospital,I have to take care of her after class so that I have no time in that evening.
Although I cannot take part in your birthday party,Tom will bring my gift to you on firday.I truthly hope you would like my gift and have a fun time in the party.
I am sorry again for any inconvenience that may have casused you.
Yours,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing（拼写错误） to make an apology to you for I cannot attend to your birthday party this firday（Friday）evening. During to my grandfather in hospital, I have to take care of her（应该是him）after class so that I have no time in that evening.Although I cannot take part in your birthday party, Tom will bring my gift to you on firday（Friday）. I truthly hope you would like my gift and have a fun（建议用good）time in the party.I am sorry again for any inconvenience that may have casused（拼写错误，后加介词to） you.Yours,Li Ming点评：6-7分注意细节。最后一段比较明显的套用模板，你缺席生日应该不会对他造成什么不便，所以用在这里不是很符合上文内容。
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