考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(482)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am very much looking forward to you visit to my university.It is a big surprise that we finally have the chance to meet three years later.However,I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport immediately.
I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happen.The reason is that your flight will arrive tomorrow afternoon,in the same time,I must attend a most important meeting of Youth Economic Association.But I can get to the airport about an hour after you land.How about waiting for me?
Please accept my apologize for my oversight.I will get to the airport as fast as I could.
Your sincerely,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am very much looking forward to you（应该用所有格your，后面的visit做名词）visit to my university. It is a big surprise that we finally have the chance to meet three years later. However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport immediately. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happen. The reason is that your flight will arrive tomorrow afternoon, in the same time, I must attend a most（改成very）important meeting of Youth Economic Association. But I can get to the airport about an hour after you land. How about waiting for me?Please accept my apologize（用名词apology） for my oversight（因为前面没有说是因为你没有搞清楚你的schedule而导致，所以这里用oversight会稍显突兀）. I will get to the airport as fast as I could.Your（应该用Yours）sincerely, LiMing点评：7分要注意细节处，不要在格式上丢分，注意控制字数。
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