考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(489)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize for having lost the book called “The Secret “ which you lent to me last week .I was too careless to forget to check my bag when I left the library yesterday . I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
Now something must be done to solve this problem because I know the book you like very much is limited edition .Either I can try my best to buy the similar one to return you or how about your buying another book by yourself and I will pay for you ? And if there are any other solutions you prefer, please let me know at your earliest convenience .
Once again, I am sorry for my carelessness .Looking forward to your reply .
Your sincerely,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize for having lost the book called “The Secret “（英语中说明不用引号，The Secret）which you lent to me last week .I was too careless to forget to check my bag when I left the library yesterday . I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.（不太符合上下文） Now something must be done to solve this problem because I know the book you like very much is limited edition .Either I can try my best to buy the similar one to return you or how about your buying（因为这是一个句子，改成you buy） another book by yourself and I will pay for you（应该是it） ? And if there are any other solutions you prefer, please let me know at your earliest convenience.Once again, I am sorry for my carelessness .Looking forward to your reply. Your（Yours） sincerely,LiMing点评：7分写的还可以，用了一些模板的内容。字数超多有点多
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