考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(490)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for I cannot hand in the task on time.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
Yesterday,Isuddenly had a headche and my parents send me to the hospital.The task had finished and send it to your mailbox.Please let me know if anything needs to be amended.I must adjust as soon as possible.I am sorry for any inconvenience my leaving may cause.
I sincerely hope you can understand my sistuation and accept my apologize.
yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing to make an apology to you for I cannot hand in the task on time. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. Yesterday, I suddenly had a headche（拼写错误）and my parents send me to the hospital. The task had finished（应该用被动语态） and send（它的主语应该是I） it to your mailbox. Please let me know if anything needs to be amended. I must adjust as soon as possible. I am sorry for any inconvenience my leaving may cause. I sincerely hope you can understand my sistuation（拼写错误） and accept my apologize（应该用名词apology）.yours （Yours）sincerely,Li Ming点评：6-7分要注意细节处的用词和表达。
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