考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(492)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Mr Bob,
I am LIMING,a deigner of ShenZhen company. Please accept my sincere apology for meeting absence.The reason for which the bus I takeing broke down.when I arrived the hall where we appointmented,it was late.So I could notmeet you. I hope we have a chance again to conmunicate each other in the future,or other academic exchange.Your company mainly engaged in building design alike our’s, Because we are at the initial stage of operation,then I need learn from you.
Once again, I am sorry for absence for you . Finally, I look forward to your reply.
Yours LIMING
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
（加Dear）Mr（Mr.） Bob, I am LIMING（LiMing）, a deigner（拼写错误） of ShenZhen（Shenzhen） company. Please accept my sincere apology for meeting absence. The reason for which（改成was that） the bus I takeing（拼写错误） broke down. when（When） I arrived the hall where we appointmented（拼写错误）, it was late. So I could notmeet you. I hope we have a chance again to conmunicate（拼写错误）（加介词with） each other in the future, or other academic exchange. Your company mainly engaged in building design alike our’s, Because we are at the initial stage of operation, then I need learn from you. Once again, I am sorry for absence for you. Finally, I look forward to your reply.Yours LIMING（结尾分两行，建议看一下其他同学的落款）点评：5分一般采用三段式。建议同学分析一下范文。这种文体的写作要简单明了。另外注意格式。
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