考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(456)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob，
I have to say sorry to you , my brother , for my rudeness and offensive words last noon .
Being a little drunk then , I allowed those stupid behaviors and words to pour out unexpectedly . I even didn’t realized the huge mistake I had made until I noticed your embarrassed and injured expression . But please trust me that I was really not in mind to dishonor your religion . I know you , with your whole family , are religious Christian , it is indeed unforgiven for me to make fun of Blessed Virgin Mary . I felt extremely guilt all the while after awaking , and I promise to you that this kind of incidents will not happen again.
Please accept my sincere apology , I am really praying for your forgiveness .
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob， I have to say sorry to you, my brother, for my rudeness and offensive words last noon. Being a little drunk then, I allowed those stupid behaviors and words to pour out unexpectedly. I even didn’t realized（用动词原形） the huge mistake I had made until I noticed your embarrassed and injured expression . But please trust me that I was really not in mind to dishonor your religion. I know you, with your whole family, are religious Christian, it is indeed unforgiven（unforgiving） for me to make fun of Blessed Virgin Mary. I felt extremely guilt all the while after awaking, and I promise to you that this kind of incidents will not happen again. Please accept my sincere apology,（加连词and） I am really praying for your forgiveness.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分错误比较少，但要注意控制字数。考试中的作文最好不要涉及宗教政治有关的内容。
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