考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(448)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I'm writing this letter to make an apology for my dog has jumped into your beautiful garden and knocked several pot flowers over.Had I kept an eye on my dog,it wouldn't happen.I'm so sorry for my carlessness.
To compensate your loss,how about six pot flowers of the same kind,or you may be fond of some other plants?Whether I go to the plant shop alone or we go there together when you are convenient,it's up to you.Please let me know which solution you prefer.If you have another reasonable way to solve the matter,I will be happy to accept it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I'm writing this letter to make an apology for my dog has（去掉，这里用一般过去时比较好） jumped into your beautiful garden and knocked several pot（应该用potted） flowers over. Had I kept an eye on my dog, it wouldn't happen. I'm so sorry for my carlessness（拼写错误）. To compensate your loss, how about six pot（应该用potted） flowers of the same kind, or you may be fond of some other plants? Whether I go to the plant shop alone or we go there together when you are convenient, it's up to you. Please let me know which solution you prefer. If you have another reasonable way to solve the matter, I will be happy to accept it. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, LiMing点评：7-8分写的还算不错，结尾最好重申歉意，另外注意控制字数。
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