考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(457)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I was the graduate who ever lived in your dormitory when I studied in Canada.Now I have came back in my hometown.As I went away so hastily that I forgot to return the CD which you lended it to me several weeks ago.I am indeed very sorry for what I did,but believe that I had no intention to do that.
To remedy my mistake,I provide some ways of solving this problem for you to choose.One is that I would like to delivery it to you by EMS as soon as possible.The other is that if you are not busy listening to it recently,I will bring it to you when I come back to Canada next month.
Please accept my sincere apologies for my oversight.I will look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I was the graduate who ever lived in your dormitory when I studied in Canada. Now I have came（come的过去分词是come） back in my hometown. As（去掉，否则这句话有语法问题） I went away so hastily that I forgot to return the CD which you lended（lend的过去式是lent） it（去掉，前边有which） to me several weeks ago. I am indeed very sorry for what I did, but believe that I had no intention to do that.To remedy my mistake, I provide some ways of solving this problem for you to choose. One is that I would like to delivery（应该用动词deliver） it to you by EMS as soon as possible. The other is that if you are not busy listening to it recently, I will bring it to you when I come back to Canada next month. Please accept my sincere apologies for my oversight. I will look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.Yours truly,LiMing点评：6-7分开头的错误比较多，要注意不规则动词的过去式和过去分词。
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