考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(459)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am indeed sorry for my careless mistake that I broke your electric dictionary yesterday when I hurryly went by your desk.I have tried to mend it butit's screen totally broke into piece and the keys couldn't work normally.
To make up for my careless.I have bought a newelectric dictionaryto compensate the broken one.It is a pioneer product which has powerful function and mess memory.I wish you would like it and our friendship will not be injured by my fault.
I believe the new electric dictionary would bring much convenient for you .And if there exist any aspect you don't like,just make me konw.
Sincerely yours,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am indeed sorry for my careless mistake that I broke your electric dictionary yesterday when I hurryly（拼写错误） went by your desk. I have tried to mend it butit's（its） screen totally broke into piece（用复数） and the keys couldn't work normally.To make up for my careless.（前面的内容不是一句完整的话，改成句号） I have bought a newelectric dictionaryto compensate the broken one. It is a pioneer product which has powerful function（用复数） and mess memory. I wish you would like it and our friendship will not be injured by my fault. I believethe new electric dictionary would bring much convenient for you .And if there exist any aspect you don't like, just make me konw（拼写错误）. Sincerely yours,LiMing点评：7-8分写的还可以，一定要注意细节。
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