考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(442)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to you for apologize about I’m decide to quite this job. I understand you put more attention for me among these days and I cherish this opportunity enormously. You and your help give me a deep impression through my life.
However, as a nation renowed in the word for many of its virtue, the Chinese people have been respect and love their parents. My parents are too old to take care of themselves in the country side , so I would like to look after them return my home .Owing to their hand work , I can grown-up health and achieve success in my career.
I really hope you will accept my apology sincere. Wish you have a good time in your life.
Yours sincer，
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to you for apologize（介词后用动名词） about I’m decide to quite this job. I understand you put more attention for me among these days and I cherish this opportunity enormously. You and your help give me a deep impression through my life. However, as a nation renowed（拼写错误） in the word（world？） for many of its virtue, the Chinese people have been respect and love（注意前边有be，不能这样使用） their parents. My parents are too old to take care of themselves in the country side , so I would like to look after them return my home .Owing to their hand work , I can grown-up（这是个形容词这里应该用动词） health and achieve success in my career. I really hope you will accept my apology sincere（两个词换一下位置）. Wish you have a good time in your life.Yours sincer（应该用副词），Li Ming点评：6-7分错误稍多，另外注意控制字数。
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