考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(443)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing the letter to a apology to you for I forgot to return a book which I borrowed from you last week.Yesterday I have come back from our school and found it in my bag.I am so sorry that you cannot look to it at present.
Owing to I must waiting home for two month I donot return the book to you for the time being ,so how about your buying same a book and I will pay for it .perhaps I would it back to you through a post office. And you any other solutions inform me .
I am sorry for my carelessness.looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
LingMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writingthe letter to a apology（这里应该用动词） to you for I forgot to return a（用定冠词the） book which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come back from our schooland found it in my bag. I am so sorry that you cannotlook to it at present. Owing to I must waiting（must后用动词原形，建议改成stay at） home for two month I donot（don’t 或do not） return the book to you for the time being ,so how about your buying（改成you buy）same a book（语序应该是a same book） and I will pay for it .（这是个问句，用问号）perhaps（首字母大写） I would（缺少动词） it back to you through a（用定冠词the） post office. And you（缺少动词） any other solutionsinform me. I am sorry for my carelessness. looking（首字母大写） forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LingMing（LiMing）点评：5分虽然用了一些模板内容，但是出现了很多错误，建议同学加强一下语法知识，同时背一些例文。论坛里有很多资料，可以找一下。
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