考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(445)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to travel.Because of our company send me to participate in an exchange train programe in USA.
If you feel lonely.I have a best friend who want to travel.He can travel with you.If you approval this idea,I will tell him about this matter.Besides,I hope to visit your home and show my apologize.
I feel obliged to sorry for you again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to travel（with you）. Because of（去掉，because of后加名词性短语） our company send me to participate in an exchange train programe（拼写错误） in USA. Ifyou feel lonely.（应该用逗号） I have a best friend who want（应该用第三人称单数形式） to travel. He can travel with you. If you approval this idea, I will tell him about this matter. Besides, I hope to visit your home and show my apologize（应该用名词apology）. I feel obliged to sorry for you again.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：6分要注意细节，另外字数不够，充实一下你的内容。
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