考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(470)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize for having forgotten to return the book"gone with the wind"when I left your home.I was in such a hurry that I took your book by mistake. If I have paid more attention then,it wouldn't happen.
I must do something to solve the problem because I know it is precious to you.I can send it to you by express dilivery or I will bing it back to you next time.
Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.Once again,I am sorry for any in convenience you have sustained.
Faithfull yours,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize for having forgotten to return the book "gone with the wind"（英语中不用引号引用书名，Gone With The Wind） when I left your home. I was in such a hurry that I took your book by mistake. If I have paid more attention then, it wouldn't happen. I must do something to solve the problem because I know it is precious to you. I can send it to you by express dilivery（拼写错误） or I will bing（拼写错误） it back to you next time. Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.（这句话放在第二段更合适） Once again, I am sorry for any in convenience you have sustained.Faithfull yours, Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，再看以范文的思路和结构。
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