考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(479)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am so glad to have received the inviation to take part in your birthday party which would be very interesting.However,it is depressing that I may not beable to attendit.
I am writting to make an apology to your for my absence.On that day,one of my friend that lived in other city will come to visitme and the problem is thathe will stay here foronly one day.
I am reallysorry that I can't enjoy the party.Epress my best wishes to you in advance.
Yours,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am so glad to have received the inviation（拼写错误）to take part in your birthday party which would be very interesting. However, it is depressing that I may not beable to attendit. I am writting to make an apology to your for my absence.（这句话应该放到第一段，让人一开始就知道你这是封道歉信）On that day, one of my friend（应该用复数）that lived in other（应该用another） city will come to visitme and the problem is thathe will stay here foronly one day. I am reallysorry that I can't enjoy the party. Epress（拼写错误） my best wishes to you in advance.Yours,LiMing点评：6分建议分析一下范文，看一下结构。注意细节和拼写。
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