考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(474)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for I will not able to meet you on Monday, November 14 at 7:30 p.m. Unfortunately, I have a temporary meeting at that time. Because we have a new projrect recently, and must ensure finishing the report before the deadline.
If it is possible, I would like to see you some other time. I am free on Thursday evening November 10, or on Saturday eneving November 12. I hope one of these days is convenient for you. Just let me know what is better for you. Both phone and email are ok.
I am sorry again for my failing to keeptheappointment. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to make an apology to you for I will（应该用am） not able to meet you on Monday, November 14 at 7:30 p.m. Unfortunately, I have a temporary meeting at that time. Because we have a new projrect（拼写错误） recently, and must ensure finishing the report before the deadline. If it is possible, I would like to see you some other time. I am free on Thursday evening November 10, or on Saturday eneving（拼写错误） November 12. I hope one of these days is convenient for you. Just let me know what is better for you. Both phone and email are ok. I am sorry again for my failing to keeptheappointment. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,LiMing点评：7-8分写的还可以，注意单词的拼写。
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