考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(431)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to apologize for my fail to reply your e-mail in time. I was so busy recently that I forgot to check my e-mail. Had I pay more attention to it , I would have give some advices to those questions you inquired me in your e-mail. I hope it is not too late to compensate you.
Something must be done for my fault that might have brought you some troubles. My suggestion is that we should make a appointment, time and place decided by you, so we could solve these questions you confront together. If there is some other solutions you like please let me know at you earliest convenience.
Please accept my sincere apology for my oversight again. Thanks for your reading. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Liming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to apologize for my fail（应该用动名词） to reply your e-mail in time. I was so busy recently that I forgot to check my e-mail. Had I pay more attention to it, I would have give some advices to those questions you inquired me in your e-mail. I hope it is not too late to compensate you.
Something must be done for my fault that might have brought you some troubles. My suggestion is that we should make a（用an）appointment, time and place（加are）decided by you, so we could solve these questions you confront together（together放在这里会让人认为是these questions you confront together）. If there is some other solutions you like please let me know at you earliest convenience.
Please accept my sincere apology for my oversight again. Thanks for your reading. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely （加逗号）Liming（落款位于右下角）点评：7分写的还不错，但是字数超出的比较多，要简化你的表达。
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