考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(436)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for forgetting to give you your birthday present. I hope you can understand.
Actually, I have prepared the gift well about a month ago.As you know, I have been trying hard to pass the exam two months later. My schedule is full of different learning. I wish it would be understandable to you that I almost cannot remember what day it is everyday.
I know as a close friend it is unbelievable to miss your birthday, however I will appreciate if you forgive me this time thinking the friendship between us. Please allow me to say sorry again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for forgetting to give you your birthday present. I hope you can understand. Actually, I have prepared the gift well about a month ago. As you know, I have been trying hard to pass the exam two months later. My schedule is full of different learning. I wish it would be understandable to you that I almost cannot remember what day it is everyday（这个词用在这里不合适）. I know as a close friend it is unbelievable to miss your birthday, however（这里用and） I will appreciate if you forgive me this time thinking the friendship between us. Please allow me to say sorry again.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：6-7分注意控制字数，第二段写的不是很好。要直白的写，不要绕。建议分析一下范文。
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