考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(437)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I am a senior student and am going to graduate this summer .In order to write my graduate thesis ,I want to borrow some books from your library next week .
Could you tell me the information which I needed as follow .Firstly ,how long can we keep this books and how many books can be borrowed ?Secondly,I need books about the medical science which is published recently ,could you give me the particular accounts such as names,authors,publishing house and so on .In addition ,the opening and closing time of the library is necessary for me and whether open or not at saturday and sunday ?
Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated .Looking forward to your reply .
Yours sincerely ,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a senior student and am going to graduate this summer .In order to write my graduate thesis ,I want to borrow some books from your library next week . Couldyou tell me the information which I needed（用现在时） as follow .Firstly, how long can we keep this books（单复数保持一致） and how many books can be borrowed? Secondly, I need books about the medical science which is（应该用are，因为which的先行词是books） published recently ,could you give me the particular accounts such as names, authors, publishing house and so on .In addition ,the opening and closing time of the library is necessary for me and whether open（应该用it opens） or not at saturday and sunday（星期的首字母大写） ? Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated .Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，用了一些模板内容，字数超出的比较多。
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