考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(438)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I would like to give you my apology for my absence for the conference which you hold last week. I am so sorry for the inconvenience I have brought to you.
But I really have my own reasons for my absence. I caught a heavy cold with a high temperature on my body which let me so exhausted last week. I was too dizzy to get up from my bed .
I am indeed very sorry for what I did but believe I had no intention to do that. At last wish you have a nice weekends.
Yours,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I would like to give you my apology for my absence for the conference which you hold last week. I am so sorry for the inconvenience I have brought to you.
But I really have my own reasons for my absence. I caught a heavy cold with a high temperature on my body（这里可以直接用got fever） which let me so exhausted last week. I was too dizzy to get up from my bed.
I am indeed very sorry for what I did but believe I had no intention to do that. At last wish you have a nice weekends（单复数保持一致）.
Yours,
Li Ming点评：6分第二段稍显单薄，可以再加一点内容。
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