考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(411)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to express my apology to you for taking your book by mistake. There is a sheer negligence for me.
Because of my book is the same as yours. That day I confuse my book with yours in a hurry. I found it until arrived airplane. It is impossible to return it to at present. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. But you can use my book. I will return it to you as soon as I can.
I do hope you can forgive me for my disastrous carelessness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to express my apology to you for taking your book by mistake. There is（应该用过去时） a sheer negligence for（用on或of） me. Because of my book is the same as yours. That day I confuse my book with yours in a hurry. I found it until arrived airplane. That must be cause（这里不能这样用两个动词） inconvenient（这是个形容词，cause后要用名词convenience） for you. It is impossible to return it to you at present. I am very sorry for bring about it. But you can use my book. I will return it to you as soon as I can. I do hope you can forgive me for my disastrous carelessness. Yours sincerely,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7分整体写的还可以，错误有点多，要注意细节。
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