考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(427)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
I'm a member of the student of the social survey project who will lead our group to visit the exhibition of our town's prospect.I'm writing for some details so that this journey will satisfy both of us.
Firstly,we are curious about the method of this exhibition covered,whether the way of showing contents including videos or not.Secondly,dates of the exhibition start and end also important,we also care about the opening time of your showroom.Besides,can we take photos with these material?
I'm looking forward to favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号） I'm a member of the student of the social survey project who will lead our group to visit the exhibition of our town's prospect（是参观展览还是参观景色，说一中即可）. I'm writing for some details so that this journey will satisfy both of us. Firstly, we are curious about the method of this exhibition covered, whether the way of showing contents（这个词有动词和形容词词性，在这里应该是做动词，所以把后面的词去掉） including videos or not. Secondly, dates of the exhibition start and end also important, we also care about the opening time of your showroom. Besides, can we take photos with these material（单复数保持一致）? I'm looking forward to（加your） favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely（一般用Yours sincerely，注意后面有逗号） Li Ming点评：6分不要在格式上丢分，另外注意细节。
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