考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(425)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from youlast month.It is a nice book, and Iread it fromtime to time. Until yesterday, I cannot find it everywherewhen Iwant to reading the book.
The book which I borrowed from you is named at your home.Iwould liketo return the book which I buy a new on theday aftertomorrow.But ifyou want tobuyanotherone by yourself and I will pay for it. If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from youlast month.It is a nice book, and Iread it fromtime to time. Until yesterday, I cannot find it everywherewhen Iwant（应该用过去式） to reading（应该用动词原形） the book. The book which I borrowed from you is named at your home.Iwould liketo return the book which（用when） I buy a new on theday aftertomorrow. But ifyou want tobuyanotherone by yourself and（改成逗号） I will pay for it. If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分注意细节。模板内容有点多。注意控制字数。
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