考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(430)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear bob,
Do you still have impression on me? I am one of your students, LiMing, who was late for your class yesterday. I am so sorry both for my not having been punctual and for that I do not apologize until now. To be honest, I had planned to skip the class yesterday, but one of my classmates who had been the demonstrative room of the ward called me for she said there were only two students there, so I said I would be there later.
My dear teacher, I realized my behavior was indeed wrong for I wasted time of both yours and my classmates’. However, there really exist some factors which result in the consequence that most of us do not want to attend the class. It is our course to study as interns to contact the patients instead of sitting there just reading the book. So it may be more interesting and attractive for us to have more opportunities studying in the wards or outpatient building.
My dear teacher, I sincerely hope you can understand what we think in my position and accept my apologies, even though we know that you are too occupied to be both the teacher of us and the doctor of patients. Wish you have a happy weekend.Yours, LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear bob（Bob）,
Do you still have impression on me? I am one of your students, LiMing, who was late for your class yesterday. I am so sorry both for my not having been punctual and for that I do not apologize until now. To be honest, I had planned to skip the class yesterday, but one of my classmates who had been the demonstrative room of the ward called me for she said there were only two students there, so I said I would be there later.
My dear teacher, I realized my behavior was indeed wrong for I wasted time of both yours and my classmates’. However, there really exist some factors which result in the consequence that most of us do not want to attend the class. It is our course to study as interns to contact the patients instead of sitting there just reading the book. So it may be more interesting and attractive for us to have more opportunities studying in the wards or outpatient building.
My dear teacher, I sincerely hope you can understand what we think in my position and accept my apologies, even though we know that you are too occupied to be both the teacher of us and the doctor of patients. Wish you have a happy weekend.
Yours, LiMing（落款分两行）点评：6分虽然错误很少，但是超出字数太多，注意格式。
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