考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(402)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am so sorry to tell you that I will fail to keep my promise of giving one of my puppies to you,as all the three lovely fairies have gone for CPV,an infectious disease of high mortality.
1500 yuan given to the pet clinic and devoting all my attention to take care of them day and night could not save the faulty of missing the best recovering time.Fortunately,their mother has survived.I promise to be much more careful to look after another group of babies delivered next time,and certainly to give you the most lovely one.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation in my position,and I would like to give my apology for any inconveniences you have sustained.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am so sorry to tell you that I will fail to keep my promise of giving one of my puppies to you, as all the three lovely fairies have gone for CPV, an infectious disease of high mortality. 1500 yuan given（它的逻辑主语应该是I，所以用giving） to the pet clinic and devoting all my attention to take care of them day and night could not save the faulty of missing the best recovering time. Fortunately, their mother has survived. I promise to be much more careful to look after another group of babies delivered（应该用不定式） next time, and certainly to give you the most lovely one.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation in my position, and I would like to give my apology for any inconveniences you have sustained. Yours sincerely, Li Ming（落款位于右下角） 点评：8分写的和不错的，主语动词的使用。
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