考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(367)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing the letter to express my sincere apologize for knocking off by my bike in the campus yesterday and not giving your first aid immediately.
The reason is that it is almost to arrival late for me to take the IELTS test, which is essential to study abroad. At that time, I took the bicycle hurriedly to the test room, consequently, knocking off you absolutely was an accident. If you had a deeply hurt, I would pay for your bill of hospital and a reasonable compensation.
Please accept my apologize and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Mr. Wang（题目中给的是Bob）,I am writing the letter to express my sincere apologize（应该用名词apology） for knocking off（没有它的主语或是宾语） by my bike in the campus yesterday and not giving your（应该用you） first aid immediately.The reason is that it is（应该用过去式） almost to arrival late for me to take the IELTS test, which is essential to study abroad. At that time, I took the bicycle hurriedly to the test room, consequently, knocking off you absolutely was an accident. If you had a deeply（修饰名词用形容词） hurt, I would pay for your bill of hospital and a reasonable compensation.Please accept my apologize（应该用名词apology） and look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,
Li Ming（落款应该位于右下角）点评：6-7分整体写的还可以。错误有点多。
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