考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(394)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am very sorry to inform you that I may not attend your jass concert next Friday.
I am superised I have got the chance to visit the London National Gallery next week.You know,this is a gallery which contains pictures representaive of all European schools of art. And ,what excited me is that my idol Danine Hirst will also present there next Friday .Thus,I really don not want to miss this opportunity.
I would like to send you the latest jass CD in London and hope you can accept my faithfully apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am very sorry to inform you that I may not attend your jass（拼写错误） concert next Friday.I am superised（拼写错误） I have got the chance to visit the London National Gallery next week. You know, this is a gallery which contains pictures representaive（拼写错误）of all European schools of art. And, what excited（用一般现在时就可以了，因为还没有发生） me is that my idol Danine Hirst will also present there next Friday .Thus, I really don（do） not want to miss this opportunity. I would like to send you the latest jass（拼写错误） CD in London and hope you can accept my faithfully（修饰名词用形容词） apology. Yourssincerely, Li Ming（落款全部位于右下角）点评：6-7分错误比较多，要注意单词的拼写。
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