考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(369)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am indeed very sorry that I could not hand in the task of English Writing you gave the day before yesterday. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
I suddenly have a headache early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. Unfortunately, the doctor told me that I must stay in hospital and accept further examination. Enclosed with this letter is a copy of medical bill.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies. I will finish the task as soon as possible. Please allow me to say sorry again.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am indeed very sorry that I could not hand in the task of English Writing you gave the day before yesterday. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. I suddenly have（应该用过去式） a headache early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. Unfortunately, the doctor told me that I must stay in hospital and accept further examination. Enclosed with this letter is a copy of medical bill. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies. I will finish the task as soon as possible. Please allow me to say sorry again. Yours truly,Li Ming（落款位于右下方）点评：9分 写的很不错，错误也很好，写作中一定要注意时态。
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