考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(370)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
It has been several days since we left Shanghai.I'm writing to apologise for I can't go to Beijing with you this summer.
I'm going to be a volunteer to go to Tibet,which I've been dreamed for a long time.It is a very preciouschancefor me,because this is the lastopportunity for me to join themduring my college life.And I've been planned it since I entered into the school. So I can't miss it.
I'm thinking about that,if you don't mind,we can make another appointment to go to Beijing when I come back. I hope you'll accept my sincere apologise.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours, LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,It has been several days since we left Shanghai. I'm writing to apologise for I can't go to Beijing with you this summer.I'm going to be a volunteer to go to Tibet, which I've been dreamed（加介词of） for a long time. It is a very preciouschancefor me, because this is the lastopportunity for me to join themduring my college life. And I've been planned it since I entered into the school. So I can't miss it. I'm thinking about that, if you don't mind, we can make another appointment to go to Beijing when I come back. I hope you'll accept my sincere apologise（要用名词apology）. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, LiMing（落款要分为两行）点评：8分写的很不错，不要在格式上丢分。
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