考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(385)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am informed that your organisation is looking for ten volunteers. I am interested in this activity and want to join you,but ,I have some problems as regards the detailed information.
Fistly,will you please tell me when and where to hold this activity? Secondly, I also need to know if it is necessary for me to speak English fluently.Thirdly,I wonderdoes it matter if I do not have the relavent knowledge and experiences?
Thank you for you time and consideration of my requests. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apology for losing your favourite book you lent me yesterday.Maybe I left it in the classroom,but when I went back to look for it,it had already gone.
I am so sorry about this because I know you treasure this book quit a lot.Therefore, I have decided to buy a same book and send it to you or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price.
Please allow me to say sorry again and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am informed that your organisation（拼写错误）is looking for ten volunteers. I am interested in this activity and want to join you, but, I have some problems as regards the detailed information.Fistly（拼写错误）, will you please tell me when and where to hold this activity? Secondly, I also need to know if it is necessary for me to speak English fluently. Thirdly, I wonder whether it is proper if I do not have the relavent（拼写错误）knowledge and experiences.Thank you for you（应该用所有格your） time and consideration of my requests. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, LiMing 点评：8分写的很好，问题很清楚，语言也很见谅。注意拼写。Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to apology（这是个名词，这里应该用动词）for losing your favourite book you lent me yesterday. Maybe I left it in the classroom, but when I went back to look for it, it had already gone.I am so sorry about this because I know you treasure this book quit a lot. Therefore, I have decided to buy a same book and send it to you or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price.Please allow me to say sorry again and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Yourssincerely, LiMing点评：9分写的非常好，语言、表达都很好，字数控制的也刚刚好，向满分作文进军！
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