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考研英语待批改作文:
Dear Bob,
    I have just arrived my home from the airport. As I sit behind my desk, I just want to write the letter to apologize for having forgotten to return the CD to you when I left lace .
    Now something must be done to solve my stupid mistake, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service, if it is convenience to you. Or another way, I may bring it back to you next time I go to lace.
    Please tell me which solution you like best at your earliest convenience. I am sorry again for my carelessness.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   考研英语作文批改点评如下:
   
Dear Bob,I have just arrived my home from the airport. As I sit behind my desk, I just want to write the letter to apologize for having forgotten to return the CD to you when I left.Now something must be done to solve my stupid mistake, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service, if it is convenience(应该用形容词) to you. Or another way, I may bring it back to you next time I go to.Please tell me which solution you like best at your earliest convenience. I am sorry again for my carelessness.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评:基本是仿写模板的内容。建议同学按照模板的结构加入自己的内容。
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