考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(390)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob:
I am writting this letter to apologize for my fault that I used your bike without your allowance yesterday. I was told that I had a postbag and they requested me to take quickly yesterday afternoon,because our dormitory is far from there.In my own mind,I wanted to borrow your bike all by myself,but you was out coincidently,so I had to ride it directly.
Now I write this letter to tell you the truth and please allow me to say sorry. Finally I look forward to your reply and forgive me .
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob: （英语中用逗号） I am writing（拼写错误） this letter to apologize for my fault that I used your bike without your allowance yesterday.（以下内容另起一段） I was told that I had a postbag and they requested me to take quickly yesterday afternoon, because our dormitory is far from there. In my own mind, I wanted to borrow your bike all by myself, but you was out coincidently, so I had to ride it directly.Now I write this letter to tell you the truth and please allow me to say sorry. Finally I look forward to your reply and forgive me（这里应该用名词性的短语your forgiveness） .Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分写的还是不错的，建议用三段式。
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